Selling Wanda would have been a good experience for Ana, just sayin'.
I feel like these books could have been better. Like I said, she should have did more research and wrote a few more drafts. I'm not saying they would have been masterpieces, it's porn for fucksakes (fucksake?), but better. There are times when Ana is narrating and I think "That was actually on point, EL James should have explored it more".
I don't really read erotica, so I'm not trying to act like a big know-it-all. These are just my observations. I used to read Hermione/Snape
fic, omg. There was a novel length one that wasn't on Ashwinder, that I really loved. I think this
was it, though it wasn't on fanfiction.net when I read it.
Once I found this wonderful woman who did hilarious Buffy and Angel erotica. A couple were Buffy/Snyder, they blew my teenage mind.
I never could get into male/male fic, though I understand why so many girls do (lack of good female characters, make male characters less intimidating, they just find it hot, etc). I guess teen me needed cunnilingus in her porn. I don't know.
Anyway, the book could have been less ugh. I guess you could say this about most media though.